(Rewrite Lab Session + Instant Download)
 
The Rewrite Lab is a 90-minute, deep dive revision session where we walk through my line by line notes on your screenplay together. Your session is recorded on Zoom, and you’ll receive:
A downloadable recording of our session
Your screenplay PDF with my raw, embedded notes
Clear, actionable direction for your next draft
 
PLUS you’ll receive The 17th Step Revision Guide, an exclusive 15-page packet available only to Rewrite Lab users. This guide includes:
 
Core questions to prepare before our session
Immediate fixes you can apply before you send your script
The three principles of cinematic writing (brevity, specificity, intent)
A quick-reference checklist to elevate your writing
 
The more you implement these quick fixes before we meet, the more time we can spend on deeper craft work, strengthening your character arcs, emotional turns, pacing, clarity, and the overall reading experience.
 
This lab is designed for screenwriters who:
 
✔ Have a completed draft
✔ Want their work to feel professional 
✔ Want to avoid the common mistakes that derail most screenplays
✔ Want individualized, , industry guidance
✔ Prefer a collaborative, verbal session instead of prerecorded courses
 
WHO THIS LAB IS NOT FOR:
 
✘ Writers seeking proofreading or copy editing
✘ Writers who only want general writing feedback not specific change suggestions
✘ Writers without a completed draft (Story Consults are better for writers without completed drafts)
✘ Writers looking for coverage style comments  (this lab is collaborative, not evaluative.)
 
This is the most comprehensive and transformative rewrite support I offer.