Format: 90 minute Zoom + Instant PDF Download 
 
The Rewrite Lab is a 90-minute, script notes session where we walk through my line by line notes on your screenplay together on zoom. Your session is recorded, and you’ll receive:
A downloadable recording of our session
Your screenplay PDF with my raw, embedded notes
Clear, actionable direction for your next draft
 
PLUS you’ll get The 17th Step Revision Guide, an exclusive 15-page packet available only to Rewrite Lab users. This guide includes:
 
Core questions to prepare before our session
Immediate fixes you can apply before you send your script
The three principles of cinematic writing (brevity, specificity, intent)
A quick-reference checklist to elevate your writing
 
The more you implement these quick fixes before we meet, the more time we can spend on deeper craft work, strengthening your character arcs, emotional turns, pacing, clarity, and the overall reading experience.
 
This lab is designed for screenwriters who:
 
Have a completed draft
Want their work to feel professional 
Want to avoid the common mistakes that derail most screenplays
 
This is the most comprehensive and transformative rewrite support I offer.
 
Buy the bundle once, get a $200 discount on follow up sessions.